Comments on: ‘Eugenio’ http://www.washingtoncitypaper.com/blogs/fringe/2008/07/17/hipshot-eugenio/ Blogging the Capital Fringe Festival 2009 Tue, 04 Aug 2009 19:41:16 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: my blog http://www.washingtoncitypaper.com/blogs/fringe/2008/07/17/hipshot-eugenio/comment-page-1/#comment-23634 my blog Thu, 02 Jul 2009 12:49:10 +0000 http://www.washingtoncitypaper.com/blogs/fringe/?p=149#comment-23634 <strong>check this out...</strong> this is mine... check this out…

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]]> By: STS http://www.washingtoncitypaper.com/blogs/fringe/2008/07/17/hipshot-eugenio/comment-page-1/#comment-10542 STS Sat, 19 Jul 2008 06:36:01 +0000 http://www.washingtoncitypaper.com/blogs/fringe/?p=149#comment-10542 This was an informative performance piece, perhaps, but not a play. Far too many lines were simply exposition - the author wanted to tell a historical story more than search the characters' motivations or reveal their interactions. A little bending of the factual timeline would help compress the action and might help this piece become a play. Ditching the narrator would be a good first step - the prop/set changes suffice. This was an informative performance piece, perhaps, but not a play. Far too many lines were simply exposition – the author wanted to tell a historical story more than search the characters’ motivations or reveal their interactions. A little bending of the factual timeline would help compress the action and might help this piece become a play. Ditching the narrator would be a good first step – the prop/set changes suffice.

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